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September 2019
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Special Edition: 2019 Writing Contest Winners

Dear Readers,

Welcome to a special edition of the Magnum Opus newsletter. We just love sharing the work of the brave and talented students who took the plunge and submitted pieces for our 2019 Writing Contest. The contest was open to all students ages 8–18, whether or not they had experience with IEW. Students were asked to write an essay answering the following questions.

  • Level A – What is one of your favorite books and why? (1–3 paragraphs)

  • Levels B and C – What does it mean to you to show compassion to others? (4–7 paragraphs)
We hope you enjoy reading the winning pieces and encourage your students to participate in our next contest!   
 

Danielle Olander
Managing Editor

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LEVEL A FIRST PLACE

My Favorite Book Is The Story of Robert Bruce
By Hudson Eberhart
The Story of Robert Bruce is my favorite book because he fought battles to establish a free and independent Scotland. Robert the Bruce, King of Scots, was born in 1274 in Scotland and died in 1329. Bravely, three men, among others, volunteered their armies. These men were Andrew Murray, William Wallace, and Edward Bruce. The people who fought against Robert were Edward I of England, Edward II of England, and the Earl of Gloucester...[read more]
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LEVEL B FIRST PLACE

Double Blessing
By Katie Enoch

Dirty feet. Ripped clothes. Sickness. Hunger. These are all examples that can stir someone to feel compassion, and these are all things I see right outside the gate of my home. I am a missionary kid, and I live in Kijabe, Kenya, just an hour away from the largest slum in Africa. In the local hospital, patients are kept in public wards with about twelve in each room. Staying is expensive, and if patients can’t pay their fees, they aren’t allowed to leave and their debt increases...[read more]

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LEVEL C FIRST PLACE

Kindness Equals Courage
By Seraphina West
    Compassion. It’s a word we throw around a lot, but there are few of us who actually put it into practice on a daily basis. We go through life as though we’re scared to show others our soft side, afraid of looking ridiculous. In consequence, so many opportunities to show compassion to others—close friends to complete strangers—pass us by. Showing compassion is not only kindness, but courage. It is not only great acts that will be remembered, but small acts that will be forgotten... [read more]
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LEVEL A SECOND PLACE

Healing Hope
By Rhamie Ashley-Smith 
Usually war destroys and destructs, but Ada shows us hope in the middle of devastation and gain in the midst of loss. In Kimberly Brubaker Bradley’s book The War that Saved My Life and the sequel, The War I Finally Won, Ada and her little brother, Jamie, are evacuated from a one-room dirty flat in the poor part of London to a posh country home because of the war being waged by Hitler... [read more]
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LEVEL B SECOND PLACE

A Compelling Compassion
By Bryson Douglas

    Compassion is concern for the misfortune of others. Although I was born with lack of compassion shown to me, I truly believe God, my loving Father, has a plan for me. My favorite Bible verse is Jeremiah 29:11, which reads, “For I know the plans I have for you,” declares the Lord, “plans to prosper you, and not to harm you, plans to give you a hope and a future.” I have always been drawn to this verse because it shows God’s overwhelming compassion for me... [read more]

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LEVEL C SECOND PLACE

The Importance of Compassion
By Sophia Conti

Compassion is the ability to feel sympathy for another's struggle and to have a desire to help. Compassion is inarguably important. It is vital to any relationship if one wishes for it to last. In fact, our society as a whole would be a lot worse off without the ability to understand and care for others. While the dictionary definition is good for a broad understanding of what compassion is, it is the responsibility of individuals to determine what compassion means to them. To me, the act of compassion is a fundamental expression of humanity and hope for the future... [read more]

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LEVEL A THIRD PLACE

Impressive Creatures of the Deep

By Daniel Horlings

\What is swift? What is stealthy? Chomp – it’s a shark! Sharks by National Geographic is my favorite book. I love reading about these amazing creatures, and I would like to tell you why I love reading their story…[read more]

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LEVEL B THIRD PLACE

What Really Is Compassion?
By Hannah Moore

Compassion. It’s light, in this cold, dark, heartless world. It’s a light that allows us to see clearly in the dark, but once it flickers, it's harder to see ... then once it goes out, no one can see. No one can see which way to go. Compassion. It’s the world’s heartbeat. It keeps pounding on and on and on, but it could stop at any second, and this world would be a dead place—and so would our hearts. Compassion. It’s the lost lamb. And no matter what, we should do anything to find it, even if it means to cross into unfamiliar territory and leave everything behind to find it...[read more]

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LEVEL C THIRD PLACE

Compassion: What Is It?
By Michelle Li

To understand compassion, we must first understand what empathy and altruism are since there is plenty of overlap between these two traits. Empathy is the visceral response to another person’s feelings, for example, when you begin to tear up when you see someone else cry. It’s happened to most of us. On the other hand, altruism is an action that benefits others, for example, volunteering at a homeless shelter…[read more

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