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Happy Valentine's Day!
—The Good Sentences Team
1. Essay: Flick Chicks by Mindy Kaling (The New Yorker, 2011)

Favorite Sentence: "I like watching people fall in love onscreen so much that I can suspend my disbelief in the contrived situations that occur only in the heightened world of romantic comedies." 

—Picked by Briana Sooy, 2L (Class of 2022) 


2. Poetry: Marriage of Many Years by Dana Gioia (99 Poems, 2016)

Favorite Sentence"You are a language I have learned by heart."

—Picked by Barbara McQuade, Michigan Law Professor, Former U.S. Attorney for the Eastern District of Michigan (Class of 1991)


3. Short Story: What We Talk About When We Talk About Love by Raymond Carver (What We Talk About When We Talk About Love: Stories, 1981)

Favorite Sentence: "I could hear the human noise we sat there making, not one of us moving, not even when the room went dark."
       
—Picked by Malcolm Jures, 3L (Class of 2021)
Michigan Sentences: Here is an essay by Professor Emeritus Eileen Pollack that explores romantic relationships and power dynamics in science labs.
Syllabus Sentences: Here is a short video I give students to help them think about the "discipline of breaks."
Book Recommendations
Notes on Nuance

Note how the word "say" can create a rhetorically stylish pause.

"[T]he real purpose of the music is to insulate the poem from the rest of the programme. By this method you can have, say, a Shakespeare sonnet within three minutes of a news bulletin without, at any rate to my ear, any gross incongruity."
 
—George Orwell, "Poetry and the Microphone" (1945)
 

"But cholera’s tenure in the human body is short, about a week at most, provided the vibrio doesn’t kill the victim before that. In the nineteenth century, when cholera first emerged, that was hardly enough time to cover the nearly five thousand miles between the Sundarbans and, say, densely populated Europe."

—Sonia Shah, Pandemic: Tracking Contagions, From Cholera to Ebola and Beyond (2016)
 
Additional Resources
                                                                       
Online Course

Good with Words: Writing and Editing
Books     

Good with Words: Writing and Editing                                                              
The Syntax of Sports: Class 1 
The Syntax of Sports: Class 2
Notes on Nuance
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